Rate my Yu-Gi-Oh deck. From 1 - 10. And tell me if it stands a chance at the tournament.?

I'd rate it a 9. I'd add 2 more Sakaretsu Armor and 3 Compulsory Evacuation Device. The thing you normally want to look for is a monster that can also hurt your opponent. There's a card with Parasite in its name which turns the opponent's monsters into Insect-type monsters. This can really help with certain cards. It really stops a Marauding Captain lockdown and Comrade Swordsman of Landstar's effect.